This is the first DL book I've actively sought out in quite some time. As you can tell by my Post count, it is low, as I only recently re-visited this site and found the review of the book.
Empire of Xibalba, Book I
We have a writer who gives the DL series a pretty good writing. The reason I decided to proceed with purchasing the book was the interesting reviews I found on Amazon.com, and the humourous plot of a 20th Century hack writer "reborn" in the Deathlands. Ron Miles, of course said it all in his review, so I cannot add too much to the prospective reader, other than take it in with a smile.
I did see an early error, that of Ryan carrying his SIG-Sauer P-226 with the safety off. From book one, Pilgrimage of Hell, Ryan's P-226 does not have a safety catch (they are all internal), J. B. had threaded the barrel for a suppressor, it does not have an integral one as mentioned in some past books, either. I think after this little "mini-series," which you can consider the multiple-book series within a series, the group, if they survive, should re-arm with some new (to them) weaponry and get a change of clothes. That gets into the oft-discussed and frustration-filled discussion of threads past and present so lets not dwell upon it now in this review.