Love the way it's going. Been on vacation for a week and got to catch up on my reading your story.

thanks man..been cranking through it....gonna trail off for about a week as i go away with my little one...will tyr to get more up tomorrow...

Best chapter yet Dan!Keep it coming man.Geez that Kris is a badass!lol!

hehehe...i will try to post some more tomorrow..but that is gonna be it for the week bud...sorry - but will be leaving the manuscript behind for some time with the family...

All good bro!Have fun with the family!!!

Love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks! gonna be next wednesday or thursday at the earliest...the next parts i have written are not edited yet..and i do promise some more action...think you guys will like it...

Like always,loved it an keep it coming sir!

Or else I will fly to wherever the hell you live an......teach ya how to shoot that damn Sig!lol.

uh huh..bring it biotch! ;-) lol

Maybe one o these day's Ron will orchestrate a convention for all us "Kool DL nerds" huh?Then we can meet in person?haha

none of us "kool" mofo's have the $$ to travel to see each toehr i don't think..i know i'm broke as a joke..oh well

Hey Hey Whoa! I'm no nerd... I'm a geek! So get it right or pay the price! GOSH! LOL!

Sun

You've got a good mind for violence Dan, I can't wait to see more man! Explosions, blood, bullets... now that's my kind of jam! lol...

Sun

there will be more action from here on out - i thought of this book as kind of a stand alone one..so had to spend some time setting the scenes and getting the characters developed...coming up next week will finally be the good natured showdown between Kris and Ryan...it is short - but i think it turned out well..have to edit it and tweak it but i've run out of time this week before i head out..glad you liked it!

Great reading.Have a good time with the family.

Loved the action bro.excellent!!!!

Like how you worked "Mac" in too.So now we have Sonny/Mac/Kris/and Dan(maybe the coolest DL characters ever?haha)Good work.Best post yet Dan.

Have a good time w/the family bro.

thanks..think i'm maxed out on characters now....sorry there will be nothing new till tuesday or wednesday next week...