Delphi - love the character
Cannies - one of the more boring threats of the Deathlands
Editing - Crappy editing is running rampant in almost everything I read nowadays, but none more irritating and abundant as in the "Desert Kings". Spelling mistakes abound!!!!
Pollotta - It has gotten to where I know who has written a certain DeathLands book before the end of the 10th page. Certain characters speech patterns are exaggerated, while other characters strengths are under-utilized, the amount of back-story, the amount of "techiness" or lack thereof.
Overall - Despite the annoying grammar and spelling mistakes...the story was interesting, though slightly stale. Bringing in one of the Rogan brothers was an excellent touch though offing him before any interaction with the Group was disappointing.